I've had a slight change of plans. Instead of writing Shinjo's story, as announced earlier, in Girl Pays A Debt, I've decided to focus on a different story. My wife and I spent last summer in France and England, and we sketched out a couple of possible stories at that time, and she has been urging me to write one of those first. So, here goes!
A team of terrorists invades the Louvre, expecting little resistance from a flock of tourists. Little do they realize they've roused a sleeping dragon. She wasn't lying in wait for them, but when they seize someone she cares about to cover their escape, she'll pursue them across France to get her own back again. No one is what they appear to be in Girl Stalks The Ruins.
If all goes well, I'll have Book 8 finished by the end of the summer, and then will turn to Girl Pays A Debt, which I hope to complete before Christmas. Wish me luck, everyone!
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Tuesday, March 14, 2017
Emily Kane Adventures #8
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Sunday, March 5, 2017
Book 8 Underway!
Work has begun on Book 8 of the Emily Kane Adventures. This one takes up Shinjo's story from Book 3 -- the Yakuza who agrees to help Emily in Seoul -- as well as the story of Haru Okamoto, who may be the last living member of the once powerful Heiji daimyo. The working title for this book is Girl Pays A Debt.
For the Connie Savaransky fans among you, I've also begun sketching a book to follow her adventures, and it looks like the first one will also include Ip Mao Bao, the girl Connie and Danko met in Myanmar in Book 7, Girl Goes To Wudang. If all goes well, both books should be complete by the end of the summer -- take that promise for what it's worth.
I'll keep you updated on the progress, and if you're on my mailing list, I'll probably send out a few sample chapters in a few weeks. And look for a sample cover here soon!
For the Connie Savaransky fans among you, I've also begun sketching a book to follow her adventures, and it looks like the first one will also include Ip Mao Bao, the girl Connie and Danko met in Myanmar in Book 7, Girl Goes To Wudang. If all goes well, both books should be complete by the end of the summer -- take that promise for what it's worth.
I'll keep you updated on the progress, and if you're on my mailing list, I'll probably send out a few sample chapters in a few weeks. And look for a sample cover here soon!
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Friday, December 16, 2016
New Paperback Editions Available, and Kindle Unlimited Ebooks
Just a heads-up about Books 5 & 6 -- paperback editions of Girl Takes The Oath and Girl Rides The Wind are now available in time for Christmas. These would make great presents for the Adventure-Espionage-Thriller lover in your life. There's still plenty of time for orders to arrive and fit under the tree.
I'm almost done with Book 7, Girl Goes To Wudang, and though it's taken longer than I expected, it may well turn out to be the best book in the entire series. Emily is posted to the Defense Attaché's office at the US Embassy in Beijing. She is thrust into the middle of several intrigues, and must determine if it's safe to return Li Li to China and her uncle, Jiang Xi, who has requested a reunion, now that he's getting married.
Also, in a change of policy, Amazon has made it possible for me to offer all six Emily Kane Adventures through the Kindle Unlimited program. What this means is that for a small monthly fee, you can borrow all six ebooks effectively for free. The downside of the KU program is that I have to make the ebooks exclusive to Amazon. If this turns out to inconvenience too many of Emily's fans, I will reconsider participation in the program in 6 months.
As always, I welcome any feedback you may care to offer on this program, or any aspect of the series.
I'm almost done with Book 7, Girl Goes To Wudang, and though it's taken longer than I expected, it may well turn out to be the best book in the entire series. Emily is posted to the Defense Attaché's office at the US Embassy in Beijing. She is thrust into the middle of several intrigues, and must determine if it's safe to return Li Li to China and her uncle, Jiang Xi, who has requested a reunion, now that he's getting married.
Also, in a change of policy, Amazon has made it possible for me to offer all six Emily Kane Adventures through the Kindle Unlimited program. What this means is that for a small monthly fee, you can borrow all six ebooks effectively for free. The downside of the KU program is that I have to make the ebooks exclusive to Amazon. If this turns out to inconvenience too many of Emily's fans, I will reconsider participation in the program in 6 months.
As always, I welcome any feedback you may care to offer on this program, or any aspect of the series.
Saturday, May 14, 2016
New Cover for Book #1, Girl Fights Back
Some of you may have already noticed, but for the rest of the world, it's official, Girl Fights Back has a new cover.
In case you're wondering, I was fond of the old cover, since it seemed to express at least one dimension of the passions I think Emily Kane experiences in Book #1. But other elements of the cover didn't seem to me to fit as well. She wears too much make-up, and seems too socially self-assured, and mainly displays anger and resentment.
By contrast, the new cover seems to me to express those passions and others better. In particular, beyond merely exhibiting anger, this image shows her insecurities and her resolve. That's how I tend to think of Emily, a girl who wishes for friends, and worries about her identity, traits she shares with just about every teenager who's ever lived. But she's different, too, full of confidence in one aspect of her life, but also worried about the implications of her vast abilities in the martial arts.
One last thing it shows is the depth of the darkness of her eyes, which the old cover lacked.
In case you're wondering, I was fond of the old cover, since it seemed to express at least one dimension of the passions I think Emily Kane experiences in Book #1. But other elements of the cover didn't seem to me to fit as well. She wears too much make-up, and seems too socially self-assured, and mainly displays anger and resentment.
By contrast, the new cover seems to me to express those passions and others better. In particular, beyond merely exhibiting anger, this image shows her insecurities and her resolve. That's how I tend to think of Emily, a girl who wishes for friends, and worries about her identity, traits she shares with just about every teenager who's ever lived. But she's different, too, full of confidence in one aspect of her life, but also worried about the implications of her vast abilities in the martial arts.
One last thing it shows is the depth of the darkness of her eyes, which the old cover lacked.
Monday, January 5, 2015
Sneak preview of Ch. 5 of GIRL RIDES THE WIND, Bk 6 of The Emily Kane Adventures
Chapter
Five
Shinai
“I
challenge,” the voice said, and Emily stopped at the edge of the ring, turning
to look over her shoulder. “My choice of weapon is shinai.”
“There
is no need,” she said, rushing to the center of the ring to kneel at Kano’s
feet.
“Do
not insult me,” he growled. “You will accept my challenge… unless you think it
is beneath you.”
“I
would rather be your student, Sensei,
than your opponent.”
A
moment later, she stood on the side of the ring, as Ishikawa and Lt Otani
helped her strap on protective equipment. Shinai
are practice swords, made of bamboo strips bound together in a single shaft,
lighter than a bokken, and with no
edge. But in the heat of competition, an errant blow can still do some damage…
and Kano did not look like he meant to tap her lightly.
“You
should never have entered the ring,” Lt Otani said. “This could have been
avoided if you had just let Sgt Tsukino have his victory.”
“Nonsense,”
Ishikawa roared. “Moon behaved like a donkey. He deserved what he got, and she
fought brilliantly.”
“What
are they saying?” Durant asked from behind Lt Otani.
“Dice
thinks I’m a fool, and so does Kiku-san.”
“No,
Durantu-san,” Ishikawa said, in the
best English he could muster. “I think Tenno-san is awe-inspiring. But she is
probably in for a beating.”
“I’m
sorry for getting you in to this pickle, LT,” Durant said, after Emily glowered
at him.
“Pic-kel-u?” Ishikawa said, with one
raised eyebrow as he tried to fit his mouth around the word.
“Just
like tsukemono,” Lt Otani proposed.
Emily
offered an alternative translation: “He means this is a difficult situation.”
When Ishikawa still didn’t understand, she said, “I’m screwed.”
“Yes,
yes,” Ishikawa said with a big grin. “Screwed.”
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Sneak Preview of Ch. 4 of GIRL RIDES THE WIND, Bk 6 of The Emily Kane Adventures
Chapter
Four
A Distinguished Personage
In
the hot and humid season, merely standing in formation while a party of
dignitaries made speeches could be torture. Emily managed to peek over at
Oleschenko and Durant, both of whom had begun to sweat through their fatigues.
A bit further along the line, she caught a glimpse of Ishikawa in similar
straits, but Tsukino and Kano managed to put a brave face on the whole
situation, even as the beads formed on their faces. She felt one hanging from
her own nose.
“Man,
this is interminable,” she muttered. “Why can’t a breeze find us on this
infernal base? Is that too much to ask?”
Durant
couldn’t suppress a snort at her words, and Oleschenko glowered at the two of
them. “Shut it, you two,” he hissed.
Eventually,
the proceedings on the shaded podium drew to a close, and several well-dressed
people made their way across the front of the formation, accompanied by Colonel
Kamakura, commander of the first Airborne Brigade, and Admiral Crichton,
Commander of Fleet Activities at the naval base in Sasebo, and the officer in
charge of the US contingent of the operation. The command to stand “at ease”
made its way around and Emily’s platoon assumed a slightly more comfortable
posture, feet apart and hands behind their backs.
“The
tall one is Mr. Saito,” Oleschenko whispered. “He’s the Deputy Minister of
Defense.”
“Who
are the other two?” Durant asked.
“I
imagine we’ll find out in a moment,” Emily said. She could just make out what
they said to Kano’s unit. Praise for their service in the recent evacuations
after the typhoon up north, and encouragement for the tournament to be held
later that day.
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Sunday, January 4, 2015
Sneak Preview Ch. 3 of GIRL RIDES THE WIND, Book 6 of The Emily Kane Adventures
Chapter
Three
Camp Narashino
“Gaijin kusai,” said Sergeant Hiroki Tsukino, who the rest of the
platoon knew as Moon. With a sneer and a snort, he looked across the table for
moral support.
Takeishi
Kano, who occasionally let his sergeants call him Tak, glanced at Emily sitting
a few seats away, hoping she hadn’t heard, since he knew she’d understand. The
third time club-hopping with their American guests in the Roppongi neighborhood
of Tokyo had taken a toll on him, too. But he had other concerns.
“Shut
it, Sergeant,” he growled in Japanese.
“C’mon,
Captain. How many more hakujin bars
do we have to take these guys to?”
“At
least it’s not a karaoke bar this
time,” Sgt Daisuke Ishikawa offered.
“Tenno,
what are they going on about?” Captain Oleschenko asked.
“And
do they have to call her that?” Moon said, loud enough to be heard the length
of the table. “I mean, what the hell is she playing at with a name like that
anyway?”
“Sergeant
Tsukino thinks we smell bad, sir,” Emily said.
“We
smell bad?” Sgt Durant chuckled. “What the hell does he think he smells like?”
“It’s
an old prejudice, from the second world war,” she said. “Japanese didn’t eat
much meat in those days, and they thought the GI’s smelled strange, you know,
like old butter.”
Kano
glowered at his men as she spoke. As irritating as he found her presence,
having to guard against offending her made it so much worse. She wasn’t
responsible for his father’s death, but she damn well reminded him of the infernal
code of honor that propelled him to his end. His father had sacrificed himself
to protect her, and he’d done it at the behest of the Crown Princess, even
though it required accepting a pretended disgrace in order to go undercover…
and even now, three years later, the Imperial Household still refused to
acknowledge his sacrifice, or to restore his good name.
“Moon,
you eat enough meat to smell like a slaughterhouse,” Sgt Ishikawa roared.
“What
do you know about it, Dice?” Sgt Tsukino replied.
“Only
what my nose tells me.”
Saturday, January 3, 2015
Sneak Preview: Ch. 1 of GIRL RIDES THE WIND, Bk #6 of the Emily Kane Adventures
Chapter
One
How did it come to this?
With the inflatable safely stowed among the rocks, and under the
storm-flotsam she’d collected to conceal them from any planes, or satellites,
during the two days they were still out on the open ocean, Emily Kane hauled
Sergeant Durant across the beach and into the cover of the trees.
“Damn, you’re heavy, Mick. What the hell have you been eating lately?”
He groaned back at her, semi-conscious, and only able to push off one
leg. Blood oozed from his hip and shoulder, and a gash along one rib covered by
an ill-fitting bandage, and he winced when she adjusted her grip. Once she’d
found him a comfortable spot in some brush beneath a eucalyptus tree, she
turned back toward the shore.
“I don’t like the look of those clouds,” she said over one shoulder,
not expecting a response. “This may not be good enough shelter. I’m going back
for the water and bandages, and then we can try to move again.”
It didn’t take long to gather what she needed, scowling at the horizon
the whole time, and when the inflatable bobbed loose from its makeshift
mooring, she hauled it higher up onto the rocks, trading concealment for
security “A lot of trouble for a raft we may never need again,” she muttered.
“You should’ve left me back there,” he croaked as she came within
earshot again. “I’m just slowing you down. We both know what they’re after.”
“Are you questioning my command judgment, Sergeant… again?”
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Sunday, May 4, 2014
Where to get the Emily Kane Adventures
Wondering where you can get the Emily Kane Adventures? Here's some links to major retailers who carry them.
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Friday, May 2, 2014
Sneak Peek of the Cover for Girl Takes The Oath
Well, it's here--no not book 5, Girl Takes The Oath, that'll be a few more weeks--but the cover, freshly devised, created, and designed, by Suzie O'Connell of Wellman Creek Books. You can't believe how wonderful it is to work with Suzie, and how amazing a design genius she is.
And so as not to disappoint, here's an excerpt from the book itself (sorry, not an action scene--We've got to save some surprises for the actual release):
And so as not to disappoint, here's an excerpt from the book itself (sorry, not an action scene--We've got to save some surprises for the actual release):
“C’mon, hothead,” he heard Emily coo into Padgett’s ear. “You don’t want to
give up this easily.”
The monitors beeped and flashed quietly, and something dripped into an
IV, and Padgett’s chest rose and fell, but nothing else seemed to have changed.
A dog-eared copy of Milton’s Paradise
Lost lay on the blanket at the foot of the bed. Other than the monitors,
his room was empty—no flowers, no pictures of loved ones, nothing personal.
“The nurses say he should come out of it,” Braswell said. “They just
don’t know when.”
“Doesn’t he have anyone?”
“He’s a bachelor, and his parents live in a retirement home in
Florida. I don’t think they’re strong enough to make the trip up here. And
how’d you get in here anyway?”
“Apparently the nurses think I’m his fiancée.”
She leaned over Padgett, one hand on his cheek and whispered something
in his ear, then kissed his forehead. “I’m sorry I couldn’t make it back here
until today.”
“Don’t sweat it, sister,” he said, trying to sound gruff. “We’re not
your responsibility… but it is sweet of you,” he admitted after a moment.
And before he could prevent it, the girls skidded in to the doorway,
Kiki peeking around his bathrobe, Haru standing boldly just inside the room,
exceedingly pleased with herself. “Dad, this is my friend, Michiko.”
Tomoko stepped through a second later, and stood staring at an
apparition—tall, strong, pretty in an exotic sort of way, with short black hair
framing a face not quite fully Japanese in cast and shape, and not quite not; is this how her daughters would turn out?—until
it occurred to her to ask the girl’s name: “Hajimemashite.
O-namae wa nan desu ka?”
“Watashi wa Tenno Michiko to
moshimasu,” Emily replied with a little bow.
“It is very nice to meet you, Tenno-san,” she replied in English,
returning the courtesy. “My daughters do not speak Japanese, I am sorry to say.
What an interesting name you have.”
“I told you she’s way cool,” Haru whispered.
“C’mon everybody,” Ed growled, and tried to usher them out, without
letting go of the doorframe. “I need a moment alone with Miss Tenno.” Once
Tomoko had managed to direct the girls down the hall, he took an uncertain step
into the room. “Help me get into a chair.”
“You look weaker than I expected, Ed,” she said, with one arm around
his waist
“It’s just the stitches. I’ll be fine in a day or two. But never mind
about that. I wanted to tell you… remember that extradition order?” Emily
nodded. “You don’t have to admit anything, but there’s no way it’s not you
they’re after, not after this last episode.”
She didn’t say anything, not that anything she said would make a
difference.
“It’s just that I’ve been thinking about this past month, and it
doesn’t make sense.”
“My life has never made much sense,” she said, “at least, not to me.”
“That’s harsh, but it’s not what I’m thinking. I mean, the Chinese are
clearly interested in you, but… you know, first they’re trying to extradite
you, then they chase you through town, but no weapons. Next, it’s a gang of
thugs who attack you with clubs and knives, and then this, a full-on assault
team. Either they can’t make up their minds what they want from you…”
“Or it’s different groups.”
“At least two,” Braswell said. “You know what at least one of them
wants, don’t you?” He couldn’t help but see the wheels turning behind her eyes.
And yet, the strange thing is that she didn’t seem shaken by the reflection
going on in her heart. Her eyes grew hard and dark—could they get any darker
than they already were? Too dark for a co-conspirator, much darker than that.
Before Braswell could press his speculations any deeper, a tap at the
door got his attention: two NCIS investigators flipping open badges, which they
hardly needed, since he recognized them from a meeting in the Commandant’s
office at the Naval Academy a few weeks earlier, and she must have, too—agents
Graham and Everett.
Thursday, March 20, 2014
Sneak Peak at a scene from Book #5, Girl Takes The Oath.
Here's an excerpt from the latest installment of the Emily Kane Adventures, entitled Girl Takes The Oath. Enjoy. And if you haven't started the series yet, you can find it here. In this scene Emily has agreed to give an informal lesson in hand-to-hand combat to a few friends at the Naval Academy.
“Hey, Em,” she heard Zaki’s voice call out. “We’re running out of
land.”
Emily shook her head out of the dream and laughed. “Sorry, guys. I got
lost in thought for a moment there.”
“What the hell, Em,” CJ moaned. “You didn’t say we were gonna sprint
the whole way. I’m like totally winded.”
“It’ll be a better workout this way,” Stacie cried out, huffing as
badly as CJ and Zaki.
“Stacie’s right,” Zaki said, “more like battlefield conditions.”
“The only conditions that matter are the ones inside your heart,”
Emily said. “Weak, strong, rested or tired, fearful or resolute—those are all
just states of mind.”
“Really, Em,” CJ said, one eyebrow arched into a peak of sarcasm.
“You’re really gonna go all zen on us?”
“I will if I have to. But, seriously, you can’t waste your time
wishing for the perfect conditions. When a fight breaks out, the conditions are
always bad. You have to depend on what you find within yourself.”
“And just how do we do that?” Zaki asked. “I was in a couple of fights
in high school, and I remember all too well what it’s like, that first time you
get hit. When someone hits you, I mean really tags you, it’s like your whole
brain goes numb, and you break into a cold sweat and you can’t focus on
anything.”
“That’s exactly what happens,” Emily said. “And you want to make sure
it happens to the other guy, not you.”
“So you’re saying we should be super aggressive?” CJ asked.
“Because that’s not what you said that day in the advanced
hand-to-hand class,” Stacie said.
“It’s not about aggression. It’s about initiative. Stacie, you know
what I mean, right?”
“Not exactly,” she said, looking less confident than someone with all
those muscles usually does.
“Remember what your sensei
told you about sen?”
“Yeah, well, I don’t think I ever really understood what he said about
that.”
“Okay,” Emily said as she took a deep breath. “Let’s talk it through.
We can start with CJ, but what I have to say will be true for you, too, Stacie,
and to a lesser extent for Zaki. What do you do when someone picks a fight with
you?” she asked CJ.
“I hope I remember to run,” she said through a nervous giggle.
“But if a man attacks you, he’s likely to be stronger and faster than
you. That means you won’t get away by running. And besides, if you run in
battle, you’ll let your unit down. So, in the face of superior force, and if
you can’t run, obviously you have to stand your ground, right?”
“I guess so,” CJ replied, now beginning to look very put upon by the
turn the conversation had just taken.
“So, let’s think of it in terms of an isolated encounter. If a man
attacks me, running won’t help, at least not until I’ve disabled him. Zaki,
give me a strike.”
He obliged, standing opposite her and extending his arm.
“You can see, can’t you, since his arm is longer than mine, if I step
back I place myself in a purely defensive position. If I can’t reach him, he’s
got nothing to fear from me. He can attack with impunity.”
“Okay,” CJ said, wary of the conclusion Emily might have in mind.
“That means, not only is it useless to run, but also that I have to
step forward, into his attack.”
“Yes,” Stacie cried out. “That’s just like in shotokan. We try to block and then step inside, and nail him with a
reverse punch to the center of the chest.”
“Exactly,” Emily said. “And beyond the mechanical advantage of being
able to strike with your weight on your back foot, which is the strongest
hand-strike you have, there is the hidden advantage that he won’t expect it. Of
course, when you step inside, you really have to nail him, and even then, you
still can’t run.”
“I’m not sure I can do this, Em,” CJ moaned.
“I hope you never have to, but if you do…”
“Then you better know how,” Stacie crooned.
“One last thing,” Emily continued. “Once you nail him with that strike
to the soft spot just below the bottom rib, you have to hit him several more
times. You don’t back away, or even think of running, until you’ve hurt him, by
which I mean you’ve made it physically impossible for him to pursue.”
“And that means…” CJ cringed to ask.
“It means killing or maiming; a few bruises is not enough. You have to
break his knee, or chop his throat, or maybe strike the back of his head just
above the neck, gouge out his eyes—you get the picture, I hope—all very nasty
stuff. Also, contrary to popular belief, merely kneeing him in the nuts will
not really disable him. He’ll be able to run after you within a few seconds.
Once you gain the advantage over your opponent, you don’t back off until you’ve
settled it. To do anything else is simply to hand the advantage back.”
“Oh, God,” CJ whimpered. “Isn’t there any other way?”
“Of course, there is,” Emily replied, trying to find a reassuring tone
of voice. “You always have options. And the more of ‘em you have, the better.
Pain compliance is the other main tool in your hand-to-hand arsenal.”
“What about kicking?” Stacie asked.
“CJ doesn’t have any karate training, so I didn’t mention that. But I
think of kicks as an adjunct to hand-strikes.”
“What about pain compliance, Em,” CJ chirped. “Let’s do some of that.”
“Okay, but I want to make sure you understand its limits, as a
strategy. Unless you intend to snap someone’s neck, or maim them, pain
compliance is only useful in cases where you think your opponent can be
‘reasoned’ with, if you catch my drift.”
“Yeah, but I’ve had training in pain compliance.”
“Oh, c’mon, CJ. I want to see how we stand our ground,” Stacie said.
“Let’s go over that, Em.”
After some mock bickering between the girls, Emily had Zaki simulate
an attack, first with a punch combination, and then with a grab.
“Put on pads, even if we’re only doing half-speed, or you’ll get
bruises from the blocks.”
“What about you? Are you just gonna wear grappling gloves?” Zaki
asked.
“Don’t worry, you’re not gonna hit me.”
“You mean you want me to pull the punches?”
“I mean you won’t be able to hit me.”
Zaki frowned at her, and then assumed a fighting stance.
“Whatever you say, Em.”
“Don’t be like that, big guy. You know we love you.”
Several attacks later, Zaki found himself lying on the grass
contemplating the clouds as they drifted by. One resembled a camel, another an
elephant.
“This is so humiliating. How do you keep doing that, Em?” he groaned
as he picked himself up.
“Let’s try it at one quarter speed, and we can pause after each move.”
After she leaned away and swatted the first strike across his chest,
she said, “See how I haven’t stepped back, and as I block with the right, I’m
already striking down here with the left. The bottom rib on the side is a
vulnerable spot. If I can crack it, he won’t be able to continue with that arm,
and breathing will be difficult. Though with someone as solid as Zaki, it’s
gonna take more than one blow.”
“I see,” said Stacie. “And blocking his arm across his chest closes
him off from the next attack.”
“Exactly. It takes an extra second to untangle himself. His natural
next move is to step back and swing a hook from the other side.”
“That feels about right,” Zaki said, and then stepped back for the
hook. Emily stepped forward, but leaned out of the way of his strike.
“You see how I don’t let him get further away. Distance is his friend,
so I deny him that. At this point, he’s vulnerable to a knee to the groin. But
if I do that, he’s likely to lurch forward on top of me. I might kick through
his knee, like this, or slip a right hand over his arm and strike his throat.
But I need to keep my left ready to defend against the right that he’s in a
good position to deliver.”
“Are those your best options?” CJ asked.
“Well, not exactly, but I don’t think you’re gonna be able to do
this,” she replied, leaning over even further to slip a high side-kick under
his chin, gently nudging the throat, just as he brought the right arm around.
“Holy crap,” Stacie squealed. “How on earth did you do that?”
“I had no idea you could get a kick like that in from so close,” Zaki
said, stumbling back a step or two.
“You see how it let him get some distance. I’d only do that if I meant
to finish him with it, you know, crush his windpipe.”
“Oh my God, Em,” CJ said. “There’s no way I’m flexible enough for
that.”
“Yeah, that’s why I think the better option for you is the knee to the
groin, but be prepared to shoulder him off of you, and strike his throat when
he reaches down to check the family jewels.”
“It all seems so nasty. I don’t know if I’m mean enough to do some of
this stuff.”
“Fighting is nasty, CJ. I hate it.”
“Is that why you won’t go to competitions with the team?” Stacie
asked.
“Sort of. I mean, kumite is
good training, but I hate thinking of fighting as if it were a sport.”
“Then why do you train so hard all the time?”
“Because I have to,” Emily replied, beginning to grow weary of the
subject. “Look, guys, can we get back to work?”
“Sorry, Em,” Stacie said. “It’s just you’re so good at this. It’s kind
of awesome, you know.”
“Yeah, Em,” CJ piped up. “Have you ever been in a tournament?”
Emily sighed at her friends’ persistence. Perhaps she’d have to share
something with them, but how much could she afford to reveal about herself? Her
high school friends were just the same, especially Wendy… at least until the
incident with the West Virginia bikers. Seeing a real fight up close cured them
of their fascination with abstract violence.
“Fine. I’ve been in lots of tournaments. When I was a kid I only
wanted to compete in kata, but in
high school Sensei and my dad made me do kumite,
and they insisted I compete in the men’s division.”
“Man, that sounds harsh,” Zaki said.
“My dad used to say: You’re not training to defend yourself against
women.”
“I suppose he’s got a point,” CJ said, “but still…”
“How’d you do against the men?” Stacie asked.
“Second place the first time, which showed me that I could take a
punch.”
“Was it full contact?” Zaki asked, horrified.
“No, but boys will be boys… or men, in this case.”
“What about the next time?” Stacie asked.
“At the Norfolk invitational…”
“You mean the Leatherneck Brawl?”
“Yeah, that’s the one,” she said, her mind racing back to the scene
three years earlier, and especially to the much more violent confrontation with
Tang and his operatives in the hotel parking lot later that night.
“I hope you didn’t get too roughed up,” Zaki said.
“No, and more importantly, I didn’t have to hurt anyone else,” she
added, with a wistful smile.
“Is that the tournament Coach Parker’s always talking about?” Stacie
asked. “Because according to him, you totally dominated.”
“You know, I’m not the same person I was in high school. Back then, I
could spar and kid around with my friends afterwards. Now, I don’t spar,
because I hate fighting. It’s too nasty, and I’ve just been there too many
times. I never want to fight again.”
“Have you ever been in a fight with someone as good as you?” CJ asked.
The expression in her eyes made the girls cringe, until Emily caught
herself and made an effort to compose her face. She had fought against several
people as good as she was, and even wished at moments that they would take her
life away, granting her the serenity she craved. But some tie to the world, to
a friend or a loved one, always brought her back to the restless self-assertion
necessary to prevail.
“There’s no one as good as me,” she muttered darkly, “because no one
is as evil as I am.” She thought, but did not say, “And because I am prepared
for death.”
Her lonely, mysterious admission hung in the still, humid air, like a
soap bubble drifting tremulously, ready for the lightning to burst it open and
consign its meaning to dim memory. No one dared speak for a long moment, but no
lightning came.
“Now can we get back to work?” Emily finally said, looking directly at
CJ. “It’s closing in on oh-six-hundred.”
If you enjoyed this, you can find the rest of the series here. And Girl Takes The Oath will be available this summer!
Sunday, February 23, 2014
Update on Book of The Emily Kane Adventures
I'm working on Book 5 of the Emily Kane series right now. The working title is Girl Takes The Oath. In this installment, Emily has taken Perry and Theo's advice and enrolled in the US Naval Academy. In her third year, she becomes the target of a conspiracy involving an ultra-rightwing party in Japan and militant nationalists in China. She learns that Princess Toshi--who she met at the end of Book 3--is in danger, and the Crown Princess, Masako, sends one of her samurai retainers to watch Emily's back.
Emily is in her third year, and of course the usual baddies within the Academy (think Tom Brown's School Days) have decided they don't like her. They think they can torment her, but are caught in the jaws of much nastier folks than themselves. She offers advice and instruction to the Academy karate team, but the fact that she refuses to compete in tournaments with them raises a few hackles, but what else can she do, having encountered the nasty side of fighting too often to treat it as a game.
I'll be previewing the cover soon.
Look for Book 5: Girl Takes The Oath this summer in bookstores online and everywhere.
Emily is in her third year, and of course the usual baddies within the Academy (think Tom Brown's School Days) have decided they don't like her. They think they can torment her, but are caught in the jaws of much nastier folks than themselves. She offers advice and instruction to the Academy karate team, but the fact that she refuses to compete in tournaments with them raises a few hackles, but what else can she do, having encountered the nasty side of fighting too often to treat it as a game.
I'll be previewing the cover soon.
Look for Book 5: Girl Takes The Oath this summer in bookstores online and everywhere.
Wednesday, April 17, 2013
New Blurbs for the Emily Kane Series--Short and Sweet
Three new blurbs for the titles in the Emily Kane Adventures:
Girl With A Blade
Emily Kane studies martial arts, but she never thought she'd have to use them... until her home is destroyed in a night time attack.
When her family goes into hiding she stays behind, even if it means fighting off the black-ops team who attacked her home.
She's determined to finish high school, but also to find out what her family isn't telling her about why dangerous people are hunting her.
Girl Punches Out
Girl With A Blade
Emily Kane studies martial arts, but she never thought she'd have to use them... until her home is destroyed in a night time attack.
When her family goes into hiding she stays behind, even if it means fighting off the black-ops team who attacked her home.
She's determined to finish high school, but also to find out what her family isn't telling her about why dangerous people are hunting her.
Girl Punches Out
Emily desperately wants to lead the normal life of a teenager. But events are conspiring against her.
When foreign agents force her to fight it may not be possible to enjoy the innocent pleasures of childhood anymore.
"The angel of death can hardly have friends. And the prom, what about Danny? He can hardly have a Valkyrie for his date."
Defending herself against foreign agents is one thing... but when it's family, the violence rises to a new level.
A mysterious "uncle," her father's cousin, shows an interest in Emily and her friends, and it has her family worried.
But for Emily, he may be the only way to connect with the memory of her father. The cost of trusting him may be more than she can afford to pay.
With the help of her "Granny," Emily Kane had the strength to fight off the black-ops teams hunting her.
Now she needs to find some relief from Granny, and to reconcile herself to the violence she had to unleash.
She hopes to find spiritual renewal in the crowded pantheon of the Hindus and Buddhists of Nepal. But the spirit of violence is not far behind her.
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Saturday, April 13, 2013
New cover idea and title for the Third Book
Book 3 is almost complete and I've been thinking about the title quite a bit lately. The original idea was to name the book after Emily's sword, Kusanagi. And since the great swords of the classical period in Japan are said to have whistled through grooves cut into the blade, I thought the title should be "Kusanagi: The Song of Death."
But as the story developed, it struck me that the title should not focus so much on the sword. I'd rather have the title refer to the girl holding the sword. So now the title that appeals to me is something like "Girl With a Blade," or "The Girl Takes Up Her Sword." Let me know which of these seems better to you... or if you have something else entirely in mind!
In the meantime, here's what the cover might look like. Let me know what you think.
In the meantime, here's what the cover might look like. Let me know what you think.
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Friday, August 10, 2012
Fight Scene from Girl Punches Out (Sen No Sen)
They stared at each other for what
seemed like hours, but was probably only a few seconds. Emily’s heart was
divided. The loudest noise in her head demanded that she kill this woman, tear
her life away. The notion that it might be the only way to end the threat she
posed to her family and friends was not a part of this calculus, true as it
probably was. A single strike to her throat would suffice. She found the
prospect repugnant, even viscerally nauseating. Ba We would have struck her
down in an instant, without any hesitation. Why couldn’t she?
As her breath moved in the familiar
pattern, Emily could feel the hatred in Miss Park ’s
heart. She tasted her fear, as well as her resentment. But what did Miss Park
resent her for? “She sought me out,”
Emily thought. “She attacked my
family, destroyed my life.” There was
nothing to account for it. But deep down, without exactly knowing what it could
mean, she felt how her apparent serenity galled this woman. Fear and resentment
were not a stable combination. Emily waited for the attack she knew must come.
She remembered Connie’s warning about her skills.
Wednesday, May 23, 2012
Chapter 6, Girl Punches Out (Sen No Sen)
Chapter 6
Popularity
It had been a mere two weeks since
the tournament in Norfolk. Emily won the black belt kumite, fighting in the men’s division since there were no other
women competing at her level. Her victory, her total mastery of her opponents,
had been little short of amazing to everyone there. Of course there were videos
of her matches, lots of them, circulating on the web. They would go viral soon
enough. A few kids in school had already seen them. Eventually everyone would
see them.
Chapter 5, Girl Punches Out (Sen No Sen)
Chapter 5
Bows and Arrows
The ceiling of Emily’s studio was
only partially finished. The area over the kitchen, bathroom, walk-in closet
and dining table was overhung with standard acoustic tile under joists covered
in turn by a rough plywood floor. It was just exposed rafters over the sofa,
coffee table and the sleeping area. There were a few recessed lights here and
there along the walls, but most of the floor above the ceiling was clear. She
had often mused about moving the bed, or at least the mattress, to the attic
and creating a sort of loft. The area under the peaked roof was barely high
enough to stand up in near the center. But for a bedroom it would be high
enough. On the downside, there was only one small window at one end which was
shaded by a large magnolia tree. No direct light ever entered there, and very
little air either. In the end, this reflection always ended with Emily deciding
it wasn’t worth the trouble to move the bed, even if it would have added to her
usable floor space.
Chapter 4, Girl Punches Out (Sen No Sen)
Chapter 4
Tea in the Kitchen
She sat in her pickup truck in the
driveway musing about the doctor. She was so nosy, so insistent on tests. What
was she not saying? Maybe that’s just how doctors always behave. What would
those tests show? Could they provide answers to her own questions? It probably
hadn’t occurred to her beforehand that a routine doctor’s appointment might
become an existential inquiry.
Sunday, November 13, 2011
Ch. 3, Girl Punches Out (Sen No Sen)
Chapter 3
The Doctor’s Office
Emily couldn’t remember ever seeing
a doctor before. She had always been healthy as a child, so perhaps there was
never a need. She telephoned her mother who couldn’t remember the name of the
family doctor. The connection wasn’t very good. She thought about it for a
moment, and then tried to change the subject.
“Are you not feeling well,
Chi-chan?”
“I’m fine, mom. I just think I
should have a checkup every once in a while. Don’t you?”
“Of course you should, sweetheart.
But is this really the time?”
“Well, I’ll need to have a physical
if I decide to go to the Academy.”
Ch. 2, Girl Punches Out (Sen No Sen)
Chapter 2
Coming Home
“What’s the source?”
“The Aussie’s man in the Sixth
Bureau. This is eyes only, understood?”
Don’t worry. I’ve got nothing in
the works. Has Burzynski seen it?”
“No, and let’s keep it that way for
as long as possible. If their contact gets burned it’ll come right back to us.”
“And Meacham?”
“He hasn’t seen it yet, but he will
soon. We can’t keep it buried indefinitely.”
“Let me know when he finds it.” The
line went dead.
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